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Oklahoma has a new juvenile detention center.
It is called Oklahoma Youth Academy.
It is in Tecumseh, OK.
The students are using advanced technology, such as a 3D printer.
The printer cost $1,500.
Parents seem to be happy that the new charter school is helping their troubled teens.
An open house was held last night, September 21 at 7 p.m.
Three hundred people attended.
Oklahoma Youth Academy, a new juvenile detention center in Tecumseh, OK where students will be using advanced technology, held an open house last night at 7p.m.
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